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The way your body crushes
Against me so intimately -
Chest to chest, groin to groin -
Makes me feel so giddy; it's like
I'm relearning how to breathe.

It feels like I'm suffocating
When at the same time I'm not; all
These sensations, marvelous and
Exciting, sends me into shock;
I dance upon invisible electricity.

This is my personal definition of
The phrase passionate living.

This is a mere tribute that greatly
Celebrates the wonder of the cosmos.

But most of all...
This is my declaration, one that is
Born from genuine heartfelt words.

I owe it all to you, my other half.
Do I have a secret admirer at the moment? Nope.

But I believe I will meet a man who will no doubt will inspire me to do my best. One who will teach me about love and passion and life itself :heart:
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Breath-of-Nefertari Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
Wow, you've got a real talent here! Such lovely words. Pixel Rose 
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you very much for your kind words! :D
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Breath-of-Nefertari Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014
You're most welcome! xD
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh man, thank you so much! I'm really flattered :D :love:
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
no prob! :iconsuperw00tplz:
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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dburch01 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That is really beautifully written :)
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the compliment :)
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dburch01 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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SilverAppleStock Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing, <3
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Niz13 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome description of love feelings.
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Bonniemarie Featured By Owner May 26, 2014   Traditional Artist
Lovely, know the feeling! And when it's not reciprocated :(
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:iconbritish-prophetess:
British-Prophetess Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've been in that situation before :(
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:iconbonniemarie:
Bonniemarie Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014   Traditional Artist
:hug:
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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IanabelleIsaK Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
Beautiful:heart:
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:iconbritish-prophetess:
British-Prophetess Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much for your kind words :heart:
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RemmyWinters Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful ;n;
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:iconbritish-prophetess:
British-Prophetess Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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XxMayukoxX Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
So passionate and touching!
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :) It's one of the best poems I've wrote this year!
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XxMayukoxX Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
You're welcome! And I agree, this poem is my favourite too!^^ Keep up the great work :D I can't wait to see some more! ^U^
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creativemikey Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Professional Photographer
Passion beyond words:heart:
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so much! :heart:
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Bunniilovescupcakes Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
so passionate i love it! :love:
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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Bunniilovescupcakes Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome! :)
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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sugarmints Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So detailed and passionate, I can feel the love in this! 
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you enjoyed this :D
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Elleyferranis Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014   Artisan Crafter
awww so cute!~
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:iconbritish-prophetess:
British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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RvBPhoenix Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student General Artist
The last line is my favorite part ^_^
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same here funnily enough :XD:
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RvBPhoenix Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Hehe
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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MyNamesAreTaken Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, that was pretty awesome. I love the start off especially, and it made me want to read the entire thing (which is an impressive feat, might I add.) I know exactly how this feels too. Love it! :heart:
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shadowmayne96 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student General Artist
awwww that sweet, so full of feeling.
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! ^^ Glad you enjoyed it.
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shadowmayne96 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
you're welcome :)
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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IAMProductions Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
awww cute! c:
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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IAMProductions Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
welcome! :)
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:iconbritish-prophetess:
British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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IAMProductions Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
i do not know why i said welcome! :D
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AsterDew Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Good poem.
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