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Fractured heart
Beyond emotional repair;
All that I feel is a
Chill within my soul.
The mere image of you
Lingers like a strong stench.

Must you always be so
Obnoxious and unforgiving?
Not only do you enslave me, you
Strike me down to the floor.
The bruises glows neon blue,
Enforcing your supreme conquest;
Raping me again and again.
:iconfractalmonster: got a free request from me to do an acrostic poem of his DA name.

Despite the fact I haven't experienced anything like this, I feel extreme sympathy for the people who have suffered sexual abuse and rape. They're the ones who have to pick up the pieces and get the help they need.

I remember when I was 15 I was touched up by a boy from my school and that was unwanted.
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MudSlinger077 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I curisous who's DA name this could belong to....
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The person who I wrote it for is a pretty awesome guy :)
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MudSlinger077 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I checked out some of his gallery - its awesome!
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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FractalMonster Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Well written. Glad you haven't experienced something like that yourself. Nobody should :tears:
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. And that is very true. Rape is such a serious thing :\
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FractalMonster Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
My pleasure :)

.. in fact is is an action often used in wars, probably more than has been known until recently :cries:
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InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Second stanza 4th line 'The bruises glows neon blue,' I think this should be 'bruises glow' or 'bruise glows'
This is a beautifully written poem, I admire the way you were able to make this acrostic and it doesn't even feel forced or strained like most acrostics, it flows like you meant to begin each line just like you have. Wonderful job. XD
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